Storyline the second

It is not easy, no it is not.

Besides having had a tough day and rather thinking about the new idea than working on Zara I have managed to play a bit with the storyline. It’s not perfect yet but maybe more interesting?

Here is what I came up with today:

According to the prediction Zara will destroy the world but on her quest she saves it!

Now that is 16 words but where is her mother gone in this? And is her mother so important?

Alaana her cousin (Zara does not know yet that she is her cousin though) is actually nearly destroying the world but Zara and her mother help her. Is that important to be in there?

Questions over questions to ponder about :-)!


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